It was pretty good.
It wasn't bad at all. Good style and such. It was just soooo slow.
I have ADD, and I was suffering just to get to when the (possible spoiler) girl gomes out of the closet. I was just too bored and gave it up.
Your talented, but you should speed 'er up a bit. ..Well, that's my opinion atleast.
Anyway, great work. Keep it up.